Svp corrigé moi c'est pour le bac
hello my name is saïd and i will introduce
you to my theme the golden ball
the golden ball is a trophy that comes
from the world's most popular sport the football, the golden ball was created in 1956 (nineteen fifty six) by the magazine france football, it rewards the player's season with these stats or by the number of individual or collective trophies won by the player.
originally the trophy was awarded to the best european player, but since 2007 the golden ball has been the trophy for the best player in the world
the first footballer to win this trophy is stanley matthews, an english-born player who played as a right-winger in the 1956 england national team.
the players who have marked the history of the golden ball are for example , platini, ronaldinho, zidane, cristiano ronaldo and lionel messi are the most successful players since the of the golden ball (5 trophies)
in 2014, a golden ball of honour was awarded to pele, who could not be honoured at the time.
in 2019 the golden ball was awarded for the first time to a woman who is ada hegerberg, a norwegian international footballer playing as a striker with olympique lyonnais
Hello, my name is SAID and I will introduce you
my theme the golden ball.
The golden ball is a trophy that comes
gold of the most popular sport in the world, the golden ball, was created in 1956 by France Football magazine. It rewards the player's season with these statistics or the number of individual or collective trophies he has won.
Originally, the trophy was awarded to the best European player, but since 2007, the gold ball has become the trophy for the best player in the world.
The first footballer to win this trophy is Stanley Matthews, an English-born player who played as a right winger in the 1956 English national team.
The players who have marked the history of the gold ball are, for example, Platini, Ronaldinho, Zidane, Cristiano Ronaldo and Lionel Messi are the most successful players since the golden ball (5 trophies).
In 2014, a golden ball of honor was awarded to Pelé, who could not be honored at the time.
In 2019, the golden ball was awarded for the first time to a woman, Ada Hegerberg, a Norwegian international football player playing the striker with Olympique Lyonnais. Quelques erreurs mais bravo!
alors tout d'abord je pense que tu peut supprimer le "you to" et mettre simplement " i will introduce my theme : the golden globe "
Ensuite tu peut aussi rendre le texte plus leger en modifiant le debut de ton deuxieme paragraphe par " the golden glob is a trophy created for reward the best players from the most popular sport : the football" tu aura plus de matière et tu explique en detail le but.
le reste me parait bien
j'espère t'avoir aider
Hello my name is Yannis I live in ... I have a brother and I live with my mother. I will introduce you to my talent which is the course. What I like about this sport is that we dont need any specific equipment other than creating our own course. I was inspired by people who post videos on YouTube and it made me want to do this sport. It is a rather tiring sport where you have to have endurance and force. I started doing this sport not so long ago so I only know climb and do some tricks for the moment. But I will still present what I know doing.
Je vais essayer de t'aider :
Hello my name is Yannis, I live in ..., I have a brother and I live with my mother. I will introduce you to my talent which is the course. What I like about this sport is that we don't need any specific equipment other than what's needed to create our own course. I was inspired by people who post videos on YouTube,they made me want to do this sport. It is a rather tiring sport where you have to be endurant and strong. I started doing this sport not so long ago so I don't know how to climb on walls or do some tricks for the moment. But I will still present what I do.
Tu peux mettre la version corrigée (la mienne) si tu veux,mais sache que la tienne est aussi juste ^^
Bonjour, je m'appelle ...
Salut je m'appelle
Je dirait que c'est plutôt bien, même si je ne suis pas une pro :v
Pour la partie de la photo ce serait mieux que tu remplaces le premier "her" par "this one" et "she" par "it" comme tu parles d'un objet et pas d'une personne.
Donc du coup ça fait :
My favorite photo is this one, I was 3 years old and I was next to my brother. I like it because it reminds me of good memories with my brother when I was little.
Mais sinon le reste c'est bon. :)
I’m a small girl with brown hair and brown and green eyes. Every Saturday, I swim in a club. I like reading. I am interested in music. I love traveling, later I would like to go around the world. I’m very open minded, shy but daring, patient, resourceful, creative, strange, complicated, clumsy and forgetful, ambitious, autonomous, frank…
peut etre ecrit pourquoi tes qualites sont celle ci
tom a oublié son cartable. : tom forgot his backpack.
bonne journée !
1. yes because there had a difference lifestyle .
2. the first half of 20jhr
3.it is very hupfull and very good
hello my name is saïd and i will introduce